Some people believe that the government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while others think that it is a matter of personal responsibility. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is argued that it is the government’s responsibility to impose laws and regulations on eating habits in order to improve public health, whilst others oppose that individuals should be allowed to eat freely according to their preferences. Although there are some clear merits of the former, I would contend that it is the right of people to decide on their own diets.
It is understandable why the government should enforce laws on dietary management as it can create a clear framework for improving overall health quality. In this modern era, people are overburdened with heavy workload; hence a deterioration in their habit of eating as they would turn to processed or fast food for convenience. By asking the population to follow a fixed set of food and nutritions can curb this adverse consumption significantly as unhealthy habits, say, abusing alcohol or devouring junk food are being limited; therefore potential ailments like obesity or malfunctioned digestive system can be avoided.
Having said that, I believe that individuals should be given more incentive to eat of their own will. The first reason is that, people have different tastes as well as health states that they require various scales of nutritions. Therefore, it would be difficult to decide whether to ban on a particular food or not. In addition, as technological advancements have allowed people to have more accesses to mass media such as online newspaper or television. As the result, the public’s knowledge about healthcare has raised significantly over the last decade, they are nudged towards leading a healthier lifestyle by taking up exercises or meditating without having to give up the practice of eating fast food.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of governments imposing laws on food and nutritions, I would opine that individuals should be given the privilege to eat freely.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23026315789 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01732072818 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3202538328 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139350926613 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542723038706 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418226854984 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987630445996 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377369875277 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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