Some people believe that the government should support the funds for arts, while some other people suggest that money should be used for public health and education.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The government is believed to have advice on supporting the budgets for arts, meanwhile, with the same support, it is better for using for general health and education. In my opinion, I think the government should support both arts and other public services and it seems to be equally important.
The government is believed to have advice on supporting finance for arts, meanwhile it is also suggested that with the same support, it should be prioritized for general health and education. In my opinion, developing arts is as essential as improving common health and education, and both of these should be supported.
On the one hand, public health and education are extremely important for many people, especially for people having hard conditions. All of the countries in the world always concentrate on these two. Because when people have good health, they can do everything they want. Additionally, people also need a good enough education, and the government at least is not concerned about unemployment rate, criminals,etc… Typically, Dutch people have been thinking about abolishing the prison or in Switzerland, criminals can have good renovations within 8 months to a year, they can escape from prison anytime they want.
On the other hand, arts also are important to develop mental, which is one of the most crucial factors for people. People having a weak mental, they extremely see daily life surrounded by negativity, they feel tired, even some people want to suicide by they can not overcome their hardship and also because of their findings on solustions. Luckily, arts are like searching tools for finding life purpose or they just find peace after working hard. According to some surveys, people who know how to play a musical instrument love their life more than people who just work hard, and also some scientists know playing music instruments like Albert Einstein was a decent violin player.
In conclusion, support for developing arts and education, and general health are of great importance. It helps people to have comprehensive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, at least, even so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21791044776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79336642207 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2381138277 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378007342398 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140146281024 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881757203489 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238435935879 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973446498396 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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