Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Adversities are eternal parts of our lives in ever developing world. While admitance to enduring living difficulties is widely gained by many people, I personally enunciate the idea that we should always spare no effort to strive for a better life.
On the one hand, our pragmatic lives are not always full of sweet and expectation, otherwise, are more challenge and dire. No doubt that it is human nature to dream high and picture an affluent scenario ahead, but we have no choice yet to accept our lives in the reality. On top of that, admitting what lives immerse us is necessary to keep communities out of social civils. For example, if someone has a heart graving for making incomes, yet does not have any knowledge and experiences to be employed, they will be tempted to take part in robberies and commit crimes.
On the other hand, lives fulled with difficulties can do wonnder for pushing us ahead and it is our countability to take advantage of that. I firmly subscribe to the fact that we have to apply ourshelves to get the full control of our lives and not let the living flows take the lead. Everything is all in our ability and once we beat challenge, we can get one step close to our dream life. We have to devote ourshelves to work, study and upgrade knowledge sanguinely as much as we can. Therefore, every progress and effort we made are justify success and achievement. It is overwhelmingly critised for those who are latitude and surrender to their fate.
All in all, although acceptance to live’s difficulties is appropriate in some cases, it is our responsibility to fight for a better live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
..., every progress and effort we made are justify success and achievement. It is overwhel...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...It is overwhelmingly critised for those who are latitude and surrender to their fate. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, in some cases, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70774647887 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7513386942 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.581755727 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289162787708 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0112576011119 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197729659895 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271389768831 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226767353041 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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