Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people insist on this view that they don't need to change the un fine situation and have to keep on with it, but other people has opposite idea, they try to make change in their bad job situation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons. In one side, we have people who accept the current opportunity and don't try to change them. In most cases, this type of person has specific features like do not have any self-confidence in deep down. They didn't try to change because believe have not ability to change. So although they know if they don't make change, they should spend this state, they scare to change because they thinks by changing maybe lost current position too so they don't try at all. In other side we have clever people who knows trying for change is not bad, they believe if their position isn't enough good, by making a little change can get big different. In this type of group we can see peoples who have self-confidence and self-assurance. They knows they are perfect so bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money are not suitable for themes and have to do action for making better life. In fact, I agree with second view, because I know if I don't like bad position in my life, trying to make it better not only don't make my situation worse, but also it will become better. We have to learn bad atmosphere isn't stable we should find strong power for removing it. In conclusion, I can say just one sentence, big people make their own life instead standing other person make for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me people insist on this view that they dont need to change the un fine situation an...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...ituation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons. In one side,...
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Suggestion: don't
... who accept the current opportunity and dont try to change them. In most cases, this...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pportunity and dont try to change them. In most cases, this type of person has spe...
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Suggestion: didn't
... any self-confidence in deep down. They didnt try to change because believe have not ...
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Suggestion: don't
...o change. So although they know if they dont make change, they should spend this st...
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...ough they know if they dont make change, they should spend this state, they scare...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...tate, they scare to change because they thinks by changing maybe lost current positio...
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...they scare to change because they thinks by changing maybe lost current position ...
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Suggestion: don't
...maybe lost current position too so they dont try at all. In other side we have cleve...
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Suggestion: isn't
...not bad, they believe if their position isnt enough good, by making a little change ...
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Suggestion: know
...elf-confidence and self-assurance. They knows they are perfect so bad situation such ...
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...e with second view, because I know if I dont like bad position in my life, trying to...
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Suggestion: don't
...life, trying to make it better not only dont make my situation worse, but also it wi...
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Suggestion: isn't
...better. We have to learn bad atmosphere isnt stable we should find strong power for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45774647887 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3305178033 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5045844777 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208820950086 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900411003756 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744852654679 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208820950086 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.