Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people insist on this view that they don't need to change the bad or unhappy situation and have to goes with it, but other people has opposite idea, they try to make change in their bad job situation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons.
In one side, we have people who accepts current opportunity and don't try to change it. In most cases, this type of persons has specific features for example they do not have any self-confidence in deep down. They didn't try to change because their rule’s minds is have not ability for changing. So although they know if they don't make change in current situations, they should spend by this state, they scare to change because they thinks by changing maybe lost current position too, so they don't try at all.
In other side we have clever people who knows trying for changing is not bad at all, they believe if their position isn't enough good, by making a little change can bring big different. In this type of group we can see peoples who have feel self-confidence and self-assurance in deep down. They knows they are perfect so bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money are not suitable for themes and have to do actions for making better life.
In fact, I agree with second view, because I know if I don't like bad position in my life, trying to make it better not only don't make my situation worse, but also it will become better. We have to learn bad atmosphere isn't stable, we should find strong power for removing it.
In conclusion, I can say just one sentence, big people make their own life instead standing other person make it for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: discuss
...ituation and salary. In this essay will discusses both view by some reasons. In one side...
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...better. We have to learn bad atmosphere isnt stable, we should find strong power for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35389738022 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505016722408 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7554631189 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196806703745 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087719148455 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078783087646 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132273409332 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084921467777 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.