Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that people need to accept a negative situation, for example the job you do not want to do or the salary is lower, whilst other disagree and think that people should to try their best and improve such situations. This essay will look into both sides of the argument and provide my support to the latter view.
On the one hand, i understand why some people think that it is good to accept a bad situation about job. Firstly, nowadays, it is very difficult to find a new job. Because the competition increase day by day, so if people have a job, they do not want to leave their work easy. On the other hand, people may think it is difficult to find job that suitable or a good salary for themselves. The second reason is about the employees who just graduated a short time. They think it is good for them to do a various different work to increase their knowledge or skill. Even though they know a job can be a shortage of money, but they do not care about that because they just want to have an experience.
However, many disagree and feel that it is better to try and improve such situations. The first reason worth mentioning is development of their career. I know that people can do somethings they do not like and accept it, but if they do not have a job suitable with them, it may be difficult to increase their skill about the major they learnt in university. In addition, if you not just graduated a short time, you cannot accept with shortage of money. Every people around the world, who can tell they do work just because they like this and they do not care about the money. I think lots of people want to have a suitable job with a good salary. Therefore, why it is best to accept a bad situation, people need to effort day by day to through on such situations.
To conclude, although it cannot be denied that it is good to accept a bad situation, I am of opinion that people to try and improve such situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to the latter view. On the one hand, i understand why some people think that i...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... disagree and feel that it is better to try and improve such situations. The first reas...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...tuation, I am of opinion that people to try and improve such situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32513661202 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37226608781 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396174863388 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1383110897 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241889362632 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874676388371 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753859453658 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18105705623 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365590193234 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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