Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
When confronting a bad situation, people’s views may vary on whether to accept it or try to improve it. From my perspective, it is necessary to try to change the situation with confidence and courage instead of unwillingly accept it.
Some people contend that accepting it is better than changing. They argue that situation can be temporary, not permanent. For example, people may suffer from shortage of money after buying a TV at the shopping center or just purchasing a washing machine. But this situation won’t last long until they get paid next month. Besides, job satisfaction hinges greatly on their salary. After several years people will get promoted with higher salary and they will become satisfied with their jobs. Therefore, there is no need to worry about the job and this bad situation can disappear naturally over time.
However, others maintain that trying to improve the bad situation is necessary. Firstly, we have no idea when the bad situation will automatically disappear. If people have few opportunities to get promoted because of poor management of the boss, then changing the job can outweigh staying in the same company in hope of being selected by the manager. Secondly, under much pressure, workers have to solve the problems of lacking money quickly so as to pay for other household expenses. For example, when lacking in money due to the purchase of a new house, people need to work harder to support the family, such as doing part-time jobs after work. Besides, some bad situations may exert negative impacts if not addressed in time. An unsatisfactory job may result in losing confidence and hope and frustrating the motivation. Although it seems not severe, this situation may consequently lead to people losing hope of life. Hence, it is necessary and crucial to handle the bad situation.
All in all, although a bad situation may be considered unimportant by some people, in my opinion it is critical to change it and take measures if necessary. We need to be decisive when choosing to resign due to unsatisfaction and think up more solutions to the shortage of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e the problems of lacking money quickly so as to pay for other household expenses. For e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02266288952 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82135624118 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0221555288 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.65 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232656986408 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707680328202 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525898211934 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137551623773 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404215738547 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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