Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Human life is like a wave, where there are constant ups and downs. We cannot possibly imagine a life that is the same everyday. That is why accepting bad situations is not a wise idea at all. People should keep trying harder no matter how bad life gets, because the moment someone stops doing it, it can no longer be considered a life.
We always have to go through bad situations, life is not a bed of roses. Not a single person on earth have ever been able to lead a perfect life. If people stop trying to make progress, to get themselves out of distress, they will never be happy. Their life will be just some combination of gloomy moments. If a person is in shortage of money, he/she should try to solve the situation, not accept it. People who are not satisfied with their job are not only being unfair to themselves, but also to the society. Because people with job dissatisfaction will not be able to perform their works as efficiently and perfectly they should have done. Accepting these bad situations will make their lives even worse. If they do not react to the circumstances, those will just pile up and problems will be increasing forever.
Life is a great journey, where they have to come across bad situations from time to time. But they should not just accept them silently, because doing so will end their journey, hence life. They have to try to improve their conditions. For instance, there were so many great personalities in history who had to go through a lot of hardships and struggles. We can recall the life of Nelson Mandela, who fought against the racism that the people of South Africa had to endure for a long time. But if he just accepted that situation, would he achieve anything? There are also a ton of example of people who became billionaire from extreme poverty in their past. They did not just sit in their home and accept the cruel situation. They tried their best and success followed them.
To conclude, all we need to know is that the only assurance in life is the unpredictable nature of itself. That is why it is completely impractical to accept bad situations that invade our lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ossibly imagine a life that is the same everyday. That is why accepting bad situations i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57441253264 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50692990676 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509138381201 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1584535131 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9583333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132685899918 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456215223531 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388460626915 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787810230863 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297631971564 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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