Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific world, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A growing number of individuals said that it is good to be provided with as much information as possible in business and academic field in order to do scientific research. However, others argued that a few information are too crucial to share. I partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, a great number of people believe that sharing too many information is a significant method of doing scientific research. This is because every recruit has their distinguish notion in their head so that it will be easier for them to do research in order to accomplish a great outcome. In addition, people will be able to know their pros and cons if they share each other’s thought. Apart from these, our globe will witness that this is essentially need to be addressed each other ideas altogether. If this happens, scientific researches would evolve in positive notes.
On the contrary, others argued that sharing few information has not to be freely .Hence, the key reason for this is, nowadays, the world is more competitive compare to the past that is why every individual thought that this is not a great sign for them to share many information with others because if this happens, their valuable notions will be undermined. Furthermore, every organization or recruit has their basic fundamental norms to not share much information with others. For instance, in order to mitigate covid-19 outbreaks all across the globe, every renowned company came across to innovate vaccine and made it possible. The noticeable factors for that is merely not to share many information so that they became more competitive to make this happen. Therefore, I think both are equally essential for doing research in academic and business field.
To conclude, both views have equal consideration in distinguish way for the betterment of our lives in both field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...research. However, others argued that a few information are too crucial to share. I...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little information'.
Suggestion: little information
...research. However, others argued that a few information are too crucial to share. I partially a...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...mber of people believe that sharing too many information is a significant method of ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...mber of people believe that sharing too many information is a significant method of doing scient...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little information'.
Suggestion: little information
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: Hence
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...s is not a great sign for them to share many information with others because if this...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...s is not a great sign for them to share many information with others because if this happens, th...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...factors for that is merely not to share many information so that they became more co...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...factors for that is merely not to share many information so that they became more competitive to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06535947712 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78645319624 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4674451892 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292106278726 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105011119546 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841565752952 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177821698329 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738084052615 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.