Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is true that city life is a topic of much debate. While there might be some reasons to support its drawbacks, I agree with those who consider that life is becoming easier.
On the one hand, the argument that difficult life in the city is reasonable to some extent. Firstly, about the environment, increased levels of pollution have a great cause of concern among residents of big cities. Due to own transportation, large quantities of smoke are being released into the atmosphere, causing degradation of air which contribute to various type of diseases, such as lung cancer. Secondly, the cost of living is higher each year, as rents, food, transport,... Low incomers or alumni suffer from challenges and maybe make ends meet.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that living in big cities is becoming easier. The main one relates to the modern infrastructure, such as coffee shops, banks, and sports centers,..., which are attractive to young people and are available and short distance to access. For example, if you get sick it is faster to go to the hospital instead of spending hours moving from rural to urban for treatment. The second reason for this is more employment opportunities; most people migrate to towns due to work and high salary. Companies focus on degree so it can be more advantageous for you in the urban area than countryside.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above challenges of big cities, I maintain that life in big cities is getting easier and pleasanter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87404580153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80943254987 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0395035859 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231052383255 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763679280836 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907181306298 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127194138109 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362185905283 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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