Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some people that living in big cities these days is getting more demanding. While I partly agree that there are some challenges that we might face, individuals still can take several advantages of living in a metropolis.
On the one hand, living in big cities requires people to deal with a lot of problems. The very first issue we might confront is serious pollution. Due to the influx of migration, cities are being densely populated, traffic volume, therefore, becomes higher which contributes greatly to the degradation of the environment. As a consequence, citizens are more likely to suffer from severe diseases such as bronchitis, pneumonia. Another factor which makes people struggle to get by in a metropolis is the high cost of living. This not only forces city dwellers to get into a hectic schedule at work but also to be careful spending their money in order to pay for constantly increasing house rents and other living expenses. Thus, living in big cities might be stressful and exhausting.
However, there are some perks of settling down in metropolises. Firstly, regarding career aspects, big cities offer individuals more opportunities to land a job, from which they might earn such a lucrative income to help improve their living standards. For example, many post-graduates nowadays choose to seek jobs in economic hubs like Ho Chi Minh as these cities can provide them with more career chances. Besides, the diversity of entertainment is also a key stimuli to attract more people to come living in big cities. As individuals’ demands are continually rising, recreational activities are gaining more popularity, especially to young people. As a matter of fact, big cities of course can offer them all these needs.
To recapitulate, despite some obstacles we might overcome, living in big cities is seemingly getting more comfortable and pleasanter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'stimulus'?
Suggestion: stimulus
...iversity of entertainment is also a key stimuli to attract more people to come living i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, of course, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17915309446 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90765833113 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8516230458 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268732787182 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945937254609 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072862250773 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188038606257 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222278679929 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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