People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
It is true that these days, the outside world is unable to bring people a sense of security and neither does home. This can be resulted from a host of causes that need to be solved in order to alleviate the fear in every person.
Why individuals often feel insecure either in their own houses or in public places might stem from two major reasons. Firstly, it is due to the fierceness of the present labor market. Although there might be hundreds of people applying for a position, the job vacancy only lies at a small number. This drives those who are being under employment more likely to commit crimes such as burglary and robbery in order to earn a living. Furthermore, another factor responsible for individuals’ rising fear is the increasing dangers on roads. As the population around the world constantly climbs, the volume of traffic therefore becomes denser. Consequently, not only might dwellers have to suffer from unwanted diseases, but also be at risk of being involved in traffic accidents.
To allay these concerns, there are some ways people can apply. To begin with, more job opportunities should be created by the government to meet individuals’ demands, thereby preventing them from committing crime. People then can be freed from the fear of these criminals. What is more, with a view to reducing traffic’s implications, more regulations on speed limits or careless car driving should be strongly enforced. Additionally, governments can also consider installing more surveillance cameras to assure road safety.
In conclusion, people’s fear rooted from increasing crime rate as well as the problem of road safety can be soothed by some effective measures as given above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82098208132 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.749453473 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090007715348 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292681214443 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270977573225 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534115099643 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160276525215 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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