Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in success of organisation. Behind the success of company, the role of many people not only people’s but also there is various feature of the organization. Keeping this debate in view it is worthwhile to analyze both viewpoint before reaching a reasonable solution.
Those who support the former viewpoint putting for their first arguments by saying that responsibility of manager is very major in company. Although, managers believe that organization and they work for company by whole heartedly. Moreover, good team leader make good team in his circle as well as good team shine in whole organization.
Those who support latter viewpoint putting for their first arguments by saying that no doubt, in various features of company about success. In addition, extraordinary activities like sports games, blood donate camp, outing employees, and annual day of company also influence to success. Over and above, dress code of company as well impact on status of company. According to the survey conducted by well establish newspaper ‘Hindustan times’ found that 30 percent role of extra things in company’s likes celebrate the safety month or quality circle activities are play crucial role in company.
In view of the arguments outline above, one can concluded that despite some drawbacks, the benefit of success of company by human sources and various feature of organisation is indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39240506329 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95155445469 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0574724799 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236917200777 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854368588969 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065909638374 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134713272311 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353462933421 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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