Some people believe that the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Whilst it has been argued by some people that newspapers are the best way to keep abreast of current affairs, others claim that other digital media are better hubs of information. In my opinion, both sources have their advantages which are elaborated on in this essay, yet modern forms of news sources are superior due to their ability to provide recently updated news and other useful functions.
On the one hand, there are good grounds for arguing that newspapers still hold the most popular position among newsreaders. First and foremost, while internet platforms are vulnerable to fake news and false information, newspapers are more authentic and trustworthy. Indeed, most newspaper is written by professional journalists, and undergo vigorous censorship carefully by prestigious publishers, and authorities before being made available to the public. In contrast, news on social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, can be misleading as there are few regulations about what Internet users can post. Furthermore, those who choose printed newspapers as their source of information are less likely to be affected by distractions, including advertisements and notifications that often pop up on people’s screens when they use their smartphones or laptops.
However, I agree with the assertion that newer media outlets outweigh traditional newspapers because of their high-speed information delivery and diversity. Online media can provide up-to-the-minute information about events as they happen so those who read internet-based newspapers can get hourly news updates that are essential for their life or work. For instance, for stock investors, as keeping up with the frenzy trend of the financial market and companies' business activities could make or break their success, online platforms of the press become the most effective way for them. In addition, audiences of modern means of media are provided with a comprehensive perspective under multiple forms from various sources of information. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, apart from reading news on familiar social media such as Facebook or Twitter, people can listen to analyses of medical professionals from the official website of the WHO organization to be better informed about the danger as well, and watch videos documenting tragic deaths caused by coronavirus over the world at that time.
In conclusion, some people prefer reading newspapers because of their high authenticity without distracting elements. Nevertheless, I believe modern media forms are preferable since they provide readers with quickly updated information and various experiences.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hout distracting elements. Nevertheless, I believe modern media forms are prefera...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66498740554 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06028443315 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596977329975 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5173526025 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.642857143 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3571428571 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220318363346 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737730481153 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612849776542 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141722313657 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665313171077 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hout distracting elements. Nevertheless, I believe modern media forms are prefera...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66498740554 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06028443315 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596977329975 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5173526025 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.642857143 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3571428571 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220318363346 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737730481153 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612849776542 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141722313657 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665313171077 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.