It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the method to keep abreast of current affairs. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to thier belief that reading conventional newspapers is the best way to update new. However, others argue convincingly that people can take in information more effectively through other media. Therefore, some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are two primary points for people to defend the former argument. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that printed news is more accurate and reliable than the online one thanks to a rigorous editing process. The most obvious example to prove is that the newspapers in Vietnam is checked and controlled carefully by various editors to ensure accuracy before being published , which protects learners from fake news. Furthermore, there is no doubt that there are a variety of advertisements attached in other types of media when people search new, distracting their attention from crucial issues. For instance, they could miss out on essential news associated with government policies and the job market, effecting their life negatively.
on the other hand, there are two main evidences for other people to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commomly accepted that updating informations is more convinient than printed one, helping readers approach news at the push of a button. If a person have a smart phone, it is easy for them to access to huge storage of knowledge related to different fields on user-generated without having to buy printed version. Equally important, there is no denying that news published on other media is not only hands-on but also lively, allowing readers understand deeply. A clear example being found to prove is that thanks for real picture and video about the Covid 19 pandemic in the internet, all citizens have been made fully aware of dangers of this disease, leading to a successful plan to hinder this pandemic.
IN conclussion, it is my strong belief that people can approach news through other media instead of printed newspapers. Accordingly, i highly recommend that the government should enhance people's awareness in terms of merit of media not only on updating news but olso other fields. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive of our society will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing a...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o ensure accuracy before being published , which protects learners from fake news....
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...et, effecting their life negatively. on the other hand, there are two main evid...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... without having to buy printed version. Equally important, there is no denying that new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10327455919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76125051955 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581863979849 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7558498314 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.176470588 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212193105405 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703193596303 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756798792525 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142079107828 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724803289197 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.