Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As human being, the majority of people think that taking decision in innumerable choices are more difficult in modern era. I, personally, consent to positive reasons from this tropical issue which I will elucidate more below.
To begin with, modern society is offered by numerous options almost all aspects of life, including shopping style. Instead of focusing on brands and prices, quality and durability are the most factors to filter items based on consumer’s financial capability. Thus, calculated choices might hamper them to over expenses and regression. In addition, a skillful individual is able to dedicate their ability in one profession despite the vast options of employment sectors. Being in one passion for work can be achievable since its job description brings few innovation from time to time.
On the other hand, compulsive consumers might be frustrated to select excessive products with similar features and prices. In terms of marketing strategy, this can increase the business development to gain huge profits as well as competing with others. Yet, consumers can feel dissatisfied with the trending products which could be far from what is expected.
Furthermore, kinds of working fields and its requirements probably creates difficulties for employees to perform productive and efficient. Apparently, when their low salary and common job choices encourage them to in and out of many professions, in which this would end up with insecure future career and unstable income.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, a great amount of preference which provide in this modern era significantly support public to be wise consumers and better-career prospect. This is as long as, they are filled with better decision-making towards current circumstance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun innovation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few innovations'.
Suggestion: few innovations
...evable since its job description brings few innovation from time to time. On the other hand, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49450549451 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96967729132 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684981684982 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8213139554 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0444150452616 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.015349641783 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025725977756 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258448426011 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194075843243 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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