some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
People often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices. Personally I completely agree with this statement. In this easy I will explain why .
It is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices that are available to us. For instance when you search something in the internet, there will illustrate countless websites offering entertainment, news, videos. But in my opinion, I think that the variety of choices sometime will lead to confusion on the part of average user, because if we have to make a great deal of decisions about the content, it will make we confused. A personally example of this would be the fact that I had a choice of just four TV channels when I was a child, whereas I now have access to thousands of films and series through services like Netflix.
Alongside the influence of the internet, globalization play a significant role in make so many choices for us. For example when we want to choose place to go on vacation or choose location to live , we will faced with world of options. Another instance is that when young people tend to study abroad, While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where to go and which path to take.
In conclusion. In this modern world we faced with so many options in most areas of life. This have some zagged but also cause so many problems
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...atement. In this easy I will explain why . It is undeniable that the Internet has...
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Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('personally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('example') instead of another adjective.
... the content, it will make we confused. A personally example of this would be the fact that I had a ...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o on vacation or choose location to live , we will faced with world of options. An...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...on or choose location to live , we will faced with world of options. Another instance...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e zagged but also cause so many problems
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69477911647 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65311724703 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1023206076 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219538827252 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679810571203 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587379226473 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125672177727 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575945757523 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...atement. In this easy I will explain why . It is undeniable that the Internet has...
^^
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('personally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('example') instead of another adjective.
... the content, it will make we confused. A personally example of this would be the fact that I had a ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o on vacation or choose location to live , we will faced with world of options. An...
^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...on or choose location to live , we will faced with world of options. Another instance...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e zagged but also cause so many problems
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69477911647 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65311724703 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1023206076 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219538827252 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679810571203 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587379226473 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125672177727 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575945757523 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.