Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
Nowadays when the globalization is on its upsurge. More and more individuals are eager to work and live in overseas country. But some people said that it can be lead to serious social issues. I not actually agree with this statement. This essay will explain why.
Regard to social problems. I believe that the humans is thought to live and integrate better if they belong to groups or community that have the similarities in thought and behavior. Living among foreigners who speak a totally different language can cause restrictions to integrate well, since the language is closely to the culture. Later on this different in the culture will lead to the depression make people feeling self-conscious and worst thing is that people giving up to integrate themselves in local society.
This social issues is not the big problem because of the development stage of technology. People can solve this problems very easy by using mobile phone which can translate any foreign language to your mother language. Beside that if you can integrate in oversea country it will help you open a opportunity to have a better work and new relationship which may be helpful for you in the future.
To summarize, settling a new life in a new country which speak a totally different language can cause some certain serious issues in connection with psychology and physical condition. However, I believe that if we are determined and industrious enough, we can still be able to overcome all of those aforementioned problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03187250996 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81844845404 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9270926497 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337896537428 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091144019862 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851549648926 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175934264946 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713231776889 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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