Essay topics:
Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There have been several arguments surrounding the question that whether films should solely be entertaining or they should contain other educational content as well. While I accept that the original purpose of movies is to entertain people, I believe that they would be more beneficial to viewers if there are meaningful lessons for people to learn.
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Essays by user Habui
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- Statement of Purpose 55
- Statement of purpose
- Statement of purpose
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 22
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 294.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 56.0 315.596192385 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.73556479973 4.20363070211 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69423988751 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 46.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.821428571429 0.561755894193 146% => OK
syllable_count: 91.8 506.74238477 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 9.0 49.4020404114 18% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243898211302 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173610165637 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639394692486 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243898211302 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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