Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The appearance of advertisements has become relatively frequent these days and some people hold an optimistic view towards their dominant existence. I completely agree with this view, considering the significant benefits advertising brings to the business industry and customers.
From a business point of view, the advantages of advertising are considerable. First, firms who sell goods and provide services need to tell customers about the availability and desirability of their wares, and invest in advertising to do so. The arrival of new technologies indeed make their desire more achievable. Social networking platforms like Facebook and Twitter, for example, allow companies to precisely reach their potential customers and inform them about the relative merits of their products. Secondly, companies, with the purpose of creating interactive, personalized advertisements, are always in demand of qualified advertisers. Therefore, the advertising and marketing industry continues to expand and remain its potential position in the employment market.
The benefits of advertising on customers are also noticeable. Nowadays, they can vary among different choices to find the most suitable product thanks to vivid images, descriptive and wealthy information provided in advertisements. Advertising agencies, however, do not stop at simply giving facts about the products, their ads also leave meaningful and thought-provoking messages. For instance, people helping each other by giving the products as a gift in a commercial on YouTube may motivate viewers to behave better in their daily life.
In conclusion, the benefits of advertising on both the providers and their viewers are undeniable. Hence, advertisements remain their frequent presence in our modern world.
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- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Statement of purpose 11
- Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem? 67
- Statement of purpose
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94186046512 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24871873622 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.927996418 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160102121386 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599519419611 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422362975566 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108237669395 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281335863644 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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