Some people believe people cannot solve environmental problems, whereas others believe individuals are responsible for solving environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own
It is believed by many people that the solutions of environmental damage should be under the personal responsibility, while others state that providing safe environment seems impossible for common society. This issue will cite both perspectives which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, proponents of every individual playing a key role to improve environmental concerns contend that daily activities from the fewer use of private vehicles and household appliances might be one step action to eliminate the biggest level of air pollution. By gradually using public transportation and cutting the excessive use of such appliances could safe ozone depletion on Earth. Furthermore, modern society can actively campaign sustainable habits of wrapping and packaging, promoting eco-friendly and recycling items. Take Greta Thunberg as an example, one of the youngest environmental activists addresses the threat of climate change bringing its public awareness surroundings.
On the other hand, opponents of this view state that company and factory processes dump hazardous pollutants, in which, they should greatly participate in this action. Survey conducted by environmentalists shows how disastrous the effects of their waste are, both on human and nature. This means that industrial sector need release pollution free. In addition, government may enact stricter policy of murky legal activities of changing natural environment for human purposes. Considering the illegal logging of rainforest in Indonesia, for instance, this harms wildlife and water source, thus, the authority should provide thousands of acres for national parks.
In conclusion, it seems to me that industrial response to reducing the disposal and law enforcement related to natural preservation are the main point to remedy the environmental damage. This is provided that people alter their dependency on fossil fuel vehicles.
- Governments should introduce healthcare which prevents illness rather than cures it How far do you agree with this statement 70
- Despite a large number of gyms a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world What problems are associated with this What solutions can you suggest 89
- It is believed that a heavier sentence on citizens who embroil road traffic offences can vividly optimise the safety of road users Partially I consent to the same perspective for reasonable points which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph 89
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss views and give your own opinion 84
- Some feel that individuals should have the right to strike in all jobs while others feel there are exceptions Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79298245614 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09346355634 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677192982456 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7270797178 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144920669555 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042597645448 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449869047815 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878772976655 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413431364818 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.