Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is a typical question whether a person’s culture could be measured by his nationality. I will discuss both views in details.
First, the modern world has become a global village, with multicultural environments. Migration is more common with easing visas to most countries to reside. Once migrate reside in a foreign country he often places his culture second, in order to adapt with his new culture and surrounding. For example, in terms of religious festival, the hosted country may not be suited to celebrate openly. Second, some cultures could be defined as regional wise accordingly. For example, European culture come with a bulk of several countries same as Asian culture. This demonstrate that particular personal values are sometimes common among counties.
On the flipped side, some cultures are obviously colour a particular country. Muslim countries in United Arab as, are best illustration in concerning dressing and appearance in accordance with cultural values and restrictions, connected with extreme religious teaching. Furthermore, when it is come to tourism industry, it is much important travellers to respect other cultures and heritages without any hesitation. This is clear when an European visit an Asian country, such as Sri Lanka, the women should wear a full dress and no hat when entering to a temple. This evaluates peoples understanding the importance on every cultural identity.
In sum up, the present society are more concern about everybody’s culture and its beaty. The new information technology is a vast advantage to study the importance of cultures and positively new regulations are on touch to provide more support in respect of multicultural environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, may, second, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44360902256 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03075609432 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9890974551 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159332012511 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570592334042 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417370631101 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987339898463 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042607912541 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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