Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There have been debates about whether or not illegal individuals’ identities should be concealed to the public. In this essay, I will discuss the rationales behind these two views before showing my personal viewpoint.
On the one hand, many people agree on keeping the privacy of delinquents’ personal details so that they can reintegrate back into the community easily. Indeed, without the belittlement from other people, they will not have to experience the feelings of low-esteem and stigmatization. Therefore, they will be encouraged to behave properly instead of reoffending after sentences. In contrast, revealing their facial features or form of identification will bring about permanent discrimination against those individuals, which prevents them from making ends meet, as habitual offenders are often rejected by recruitment agencies.
However, I side with those who approve of the idea of publicizing the criminals’ information . This is because revealing villains’ features can raise vigilance among people. Thus, they tend to prepare self-defense techniques and get rid of potentially violent behaviors, which will result in a decrease in crime rate. Moreover, exposuring this kind of information is also an efficient way in capturing violent criminals. For example, the police often seek the public’s help in locating wanted fugitives since residents have been widely alerted of those peoples’ identifications through official news and social media.
In conclusion, although it is undeniably humanitarian to have lawbreakers’ identities remain anonymous so that they can reunite with communitual activities without being discriminated, I am more convinced that the government has the responsibility to publicize the violent offenders’ personal details for the mutual benefits of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87169811321 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.279031762 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8154605907 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192297237008 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666048358139 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046561771994 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115077740261 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519457054822 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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