Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people argue that highly skilled people like doctors and engineers should be hould be applied to professions in the country where they studied or they should be free to work in other country if they wish. In my opinion, all claimants have the freedom to choose their life and workplace.
On the one hand,the main reason folk say that highly skilled people should work where they are trained is because they think they will bring benifits to their country in exchange for money subsidies they recieve from the goverment such as medical and engineer will be funded by the goverment during their studies or when they complete their degree they are practiced in their nation. Moreover, they work in their nation they don’t only make a social contribution but also provide economic power
On the other hand, there are several benefits for people working in another country. Firstly,they will be improved quickly their foreign language to able to communicate with foreign patiem everywhere.Secondly, salary is also an important thing in their life. When working in developed countries like the US, the average salary of a doctor is about 200usd a year so their life will become better. Moreover, they can take care of their family in the best way.
To sump up, serving our country is also very good, but in my opinion everyone has the right to freedom and democracy so they should be given the freedom to work anywhere as it is the fundamental right to take their own decrision about their work life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85992217899 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48142274841 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8132950065 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.125 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488116396127 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217026531874 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165164495631 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329944082628 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121577346328 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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