In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the
population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Rural depression is becoming an increasingly common phenomenon around the world as people leave their hometowns to move to urban areas. In this essay, I argue that this trend has a positive effect on the lives of some individuals but that it also has a series of large-scale adverse consequences for rural and urban societies.
From a personal perspective, leaving the countryside can be a positive change for those looking for a better life in the city. Simply put, dissatisfied with farming work in rural areas, many young people decide to leave their lives and go to the city to find another career path with higher salaries and advancement opportunities. Many of them have succeeded in this goal and are more satisfied with their standard of living.
However, increasing depopulation in rural areas could also hinder their economic growth. As more and more people migrate from rural to urban areas, most of whom are young people of working age, businesses will have more difficulty finding employees and customers. Furthermore, smaller populations often mean that local authorities and committees in these areas will be allocated less government funding. This could lead to a slow decline in the quality of public services and infrastructure such as roads, education and healthcare, negatively impacting the overall standard of living of those left behind.
Along with adverse impacts on rural life, the wave of mass migration from the countryside also has a number of negative impacts, spreading to major cities. In terms of operating environment, the influx of new immigrants means more household waste and toxic emissions, which could worsen the problem of infectious pollution. On the social front, increasing the price of basic, limited services such as housing or food, the increased demand could cause more people to fall into financial strain and potentially cause poverty. social instability.
In conclusion, I argue that while migration to cities and suburban areas may benefit some individuals, it negatively impacts many different areas of rural life and city. The government should take steps to make rural life more attractive rather than counter these impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'immigrants'' or 'immigrant's'?
Suggestion: immigrants'; immigrant's
...perating environment, the influx of new immigrants means more household waste and toxic em...
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Line 4, column 524, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Social
...l strain and potentially cause poverty. social instability. In conclusion, I argue th...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...some individuals, it negatively impacts many different areas of rural life and city. The gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30547550432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80825051586 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0006222184 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206749201093 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633628865076 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449944156222 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116432680813 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446999724955 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.