Some people believe that progress is always good. Others believe in preserving tradition. Which do you think is more important and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Evolution is admittedly a crucial as well as normal process in human life. Even though some people ascertain that development is essential, others argue that securing one's civilisation is better. As a matter of fact, in this essay, I would like to state that advancement is inevitable.
To commence, it is true that culture is definitely an identity of an individual. Hence, sticking to it staunchly is the perfect way to preserve it from extinction. However, development is obviously the law of natural itself. To exemplify, man evolved immensely not only by physically but also by socially in order to reach the current level.
In addition, it has been evident from the history that our universe once bombarded with numerous antisocial activities like racial discrimination, intolerance, religious persecution and many more. Needless to say, gradual progress is something which enlightened the entire mankind in order to restrict those evil practices.For instance, despite being the world's greatest democratic once India's society had been filled with plenty of such disastrous practises such as Satti system and child marriage.
To conclude what I perceived from this context is that humans should be sophisticated enough to imbibe the virtues and leave the vices of progression. Another point worth considering is that along with progress, they should uphold the positives from their culture.
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Suggestion: one's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the greatest'.
Suggestion: worlds the greatest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45412844037 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98456103619 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697247706422 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9032853213 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0620346802632 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190186241865 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266950425066 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324394279652 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168100089736 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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