Currently,there are numerous transformations have occurred in the construction arena,the open building pattern of offices or schools are one among them.As a matter of fact, there are Infinite need number of reasons for this particular trend, moreover, the positive attributes of this outweigh its flaws.
To commence, the first and foremost cause behind The construction of these designs includes, these are eco-friendly, hence this in turn helps to cut down the use of artificial lightning as well as air conditioning. To exemplify, the Lulu group, are investing a great deal of money for building green malls with centre courtyard, where people could be able to experience natural light or rain.Further more, these designs are admittedly a brainchild of certain creative minds who are exploring novel technologies to deal with this competitive world. In addition,there are infinite number of advantages for this type of structures rather than its disadvantages, such as it creates a natural environment Inside the building there, therefore a homely feeling would be nurtured inside it. As a result, either productivity or final output might be improved. Another point worth considering is that, stress level in employees or students in this type of buildings are less when compared to others. For instance,as of now, both developing and developed countries are concentrating moron constructing skyscrapers with open design than that of traditional one Stop
To conclude, what I perceive from this context is that it is too Illogical to think about an ancient building in this present scenario, thus, humans must be sophisticated enough to imbibe the virtues and leave vices of Constructions with open style.
- Some people believe that progress is always good Others believe in preserving tradition Which do you think is more important and why Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 34
- Nowadays some buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms Why is it so Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words 78
- Some people believe that progress is always good Others believe in preserving tradition Which do you think is more important and why Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41947565543 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14322147004 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.276831619 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.714285714 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190958252487 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754628227274 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555904177196 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131982002592 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267506090582 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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