Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish while other would argue that rehabilitation is as primary role. Discuss both and give your opinion.
Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish while other would argue that rehabilitation is as primary role. Discuss both and give your opinion.
Certain individuals think that the main reason for sentencing people to jail is for punishment and others believe that the major reason for going,is for rehabilitating criminals. Both of these views will be discuss in this essay and I strongly disagree with the sentence which says criminals are imprisoned to pay for their bad deeds.
To begin with, offenders are not only sent to prison for punishment only but also, to learn some vocational training in prison. Lot of people have gained to be self reliance after coming out.As this will help them to earn a living . Some of these criminals are not gainfully employed and this prompt them in pocket picking and stealing . However, during the period they are serving their terms, they can learn work such as shoe making , barbing salon to mention a few. By the time they are through they become productivity.Hence,this make them a good citizens of the nation. Furthermore,going to prison help children to understand how to behave properly in the community. For instance,a child that is implicated by bad friends influence and he is punished for crime he did not commit will certainly know the kind of people he will associate with when he is released in jail.
On the other hand, as believed by others that prison is met strictly for rehabilitating criminals, it will also help them during their time behind bar. Government law and enforcement agencies visit offenders in prison. They are enlightened about the laws and orders of the land. As, ignorance is not a defence to some crime. Such as,crossing the high way instead of using the pedestrian bridge. When such a person is persecuted he will definitely know do not it again. In addition, religious faith basis like the Christian and Muslim sometimes pay them visit.By preaching to inmates, this help to elevate their mood and mind by having faith in their creator that one day they will leave alive.
In conclusion, prison is not only for punishment of criminals but also to aid them In having a productive life after completing term.similarly,as opined by other that going to prison is majorly for rehabilitation, it help to have knowledge about how things are done in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, similarly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92929292929 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86975407841 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532828282828 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6992557843 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.736842105 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282698883963 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101956157611 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178620578321 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275301222355 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.362568526428 0.056905535591 637% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.