Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As technology has become more prevalent, most children have considered television and video games to be their main sources of entertainment. While some people argue that this phenomenon is detrimental and that children should rather read books, I personally disagree with this statement for the following reasons.
On the one hand, proponents of reading books emphasize the benefits it can bring to juveniles. Through academic books, they can broaden their knowledge. For instance, if a child searches for a History book and reads it, she is likely to acquire a deeper understanding of her country’s past lives, and how they bravely protected her nation from such invaders. She will become more appreciative of their efforts to fight against the invaders and have a better awareness of taking action to mitigate the current issues facing her country, such as pollution and territorial disputes. Another point worth considering is that children can become more mature. Through several novels, they are able to experience the characters’ lives, acknowledge the author’s perspective and afterward, enhance their point of view toward life.
On the other hand, there are a number of positive effects on children related to digital entertainment that justify its superiority over books. Initially, as children get exposed to digital devices at an early age, they are able to become familiar with advanced technology faster than those who are not allowed to use mobile phones frequently. Because technology has become integrated into the way people work, this may serve as a prerequisite for them when applying for jobs. Additionally, technology can be regarded as a stimulus for children to develop a preference for it. This can be seen in the case of the son of my mother’s friend. She allowed him to use a mobile phone when he was just a 3-year-old child, ignoring the disagreement from her parents. Contrary to their assumption that he would be addicted, an interest in coding developed inside him, and as a result, he became a professional programmer, who earned over $100,000 a year.
In conclusion, while books can be beneficial to a certain extent, they cannot outweigh the benefits of television and video games. It is recommended that children be allowed to use the Internet for about 2 hours to avoid the potential drawbacks of excessive exposure to the screen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20052083333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91636786974 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5603822745 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.470588235 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163604480046 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501211040118 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428230126163 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104576556907 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314428096864 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.