Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an impotant role in the education of children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People's opinions differ as to whether or not students should be given homework. While there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, its advantages are much more considerable.
On the one hand, there are some major advantages to giving homework. one evident strength is that it would reinforce learning and develop good study habits. school children typically retain only 50% of the information the teachers provide in class, and they need to apply that in order to truly learn it. daily assignments also help students to develop key skills such as accountability, autonomy, time management and critical thinking. Another advantage could be that it allows parents to be involved in their child's learning. Thanks to take home assignments, parents are able to track what their children are learning at school as well as their academic strengths and weaknesses. Schoolwork can also help clue parents in to the existence of any learning disabilities their children may have, allowing them to get help and adjust learning strategies as needed.
However, homework can have several disadvantages which overshadow these benefits. too much homework can be detrimental as it is not meeting the basic needs of children and adolescents. it crowds out social experience, outdoor recreation and creative activities, and usurps time that should be devoted to sleep. In addition, too many daily assignments can also harm students physically and psychologically. many students say that homework is the greatest source of stress, and the amount of homework they have to complete leads to several health problems such as headaches, exhaustion and weight loss.
In conclusion, homework certainly has some drawbacks but I believe that the benefits outweight them in long term. Teachers should give students an appropriate amount of homework so as to prevent them from health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39527027027 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87883632634 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3871445584 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273605779007 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910168955473 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671131307019 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171986609671 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323924188153 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.