It is heated discuss that whether the learning process should set multifaceted sectors or based on what the students really interesting in. It is popularly believed that the learning structure should take a wide rage for flexible future career path. However, in my view the more focus on the subject the more specialist knowledge they gain.
It is certainly the case that an emphasis on students will face to a flexible and changeable career environment such as world wide business market. If the essential skill they contain which only can apply in a special area, they would eliminated by the realistic society. As a vision the students acquires, the different subject they have ever go through will gain more opportunities to expand their knowledge base and broaden their eyesights. Furthermore, studying in music and painting deepens students’ understanding the social culture and value building social network at the same time.
Therefore, concentrating on certain subjects allows students to gain specialized knowledge and skills efficiently, enhancing the ability to apply their knowledge and skills in a workplace environment. This approach makes the students focus on main subjects encourage them to develop a more solid and complete grasp of these subjects. Essentially, in the practical future career path, the certain position always set for the people who is professional and performance well in special event such as lawyer.
In conclusion, both of these views are reasonable. Although most people believe that students should understand wide ranges of subject as good for them in the changeable situation. In my part, I believe the education structure should set for certain subject which allow the students become a professional workers.
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 84
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.Discuss both views and give your opinions. 78
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 84
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he subject the more specialist knowledge they gain. It is certainly the case ...
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Suggestion: worldwide
...d changeable career environment such as world wide business market. If the essential skill...
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'eliminate'
Suggestion: eliminate
...can apply in a special area, they would eliminated by the realistic society. As a vision t...
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Suggestion:
...ding social network at the same time. Therefore, concentrating on certain subj...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...llow the students become a professional workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91275678115 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3611080348 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341588947898 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115147906367 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646569532694 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211832062332 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084518552194 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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