Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the ultimate method to have a successful career is to attend universities while others argue that it is better to have a job after graduating from high school. This essay attempts to shed light on both views before concluding that going to universities is the best way to achieve success in one's career.
On the one hand, that having a job without going to universities benefits students may be true to a certain extent. First, working helps the young gain more experience in the fields in which they major. Although the young may make mistakes in the first place, they could learn from their failures and improve their skills, which results in their success in careers later on. Second, working would offer students the chance to earn more money, which allows them to have the freedom to achieve their goals. When young people have their salaries, they could use them to pay for tuitions of some courses they may take, which would help expand their knowledge and improve their skills needed for their career.
On the other hand, it would be imprudent to not attend universities after high school. Students can retain a deep understanding of their specialty in colleges. Consequently, they are more likely to be more professional when they work compared to young people who have jobs as soon as they leave high school. In addition, universities usually include training courses in their curriculum so they can teach students what they should do to tackle issues that may arise in real life. For example, most medical students spend their last year in colleges working as trainees at hospitals in order to gain more experience as well as master the skills they have learnt in classes. Therefore, these students would be likely to get highly remunerative jobs later on. With the knowledge, skills, and experience provided by disciplines in colleges, the young stand a high chance of succeeding in their career in the future.
In conclusion, while having a job after high school may be beneficial for students' careers, I would argue that attending universities is the most effective method for the young to have successful careers in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s is the best way to achieve success in ones career. On the one hand, that having...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96438356164 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53916590297 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484931506849 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2145502638 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185325228108 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750655870641 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891449303714 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164957114419 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12622544883 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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