Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, there is an on-going debate about whether graduating at university or college or immediately engage in the workforce after high school is the best way to get a successful career. Personally, I believe that it is better to go to college or university.
Many individuals at their early stages of life want to start work straight after school. Having a job enables them to be independent since they are able to afford their cost of living. They will have one or two years of hands-on industry experience which is usually an asset when applying for a job. Although young people can get certain jobs without a formal degree, they will find it a struggle to advance professionally. Employers tend to choose people with academic qualifications for important positions, so that those with fewer qualifications may find it challenging to rise the ranks.
On the other hand, it is my belief that continuing study is more beneficial for the youth. To commence with, academic qualifications are required in so many fields. For example, it is impossible to be a doctor or accountant without a relevant degree. As a result, with qualifications, the young can gain higher salaries right from the outset and have better job opportunities. Moreover, some academic programs require that students do an internship or a work placement in order to graduate. Due to this, not only do graduates will have academic skills, but they also familiarize themselves with the real working environment.
As outlined above, after analyzing both views, it seems to me that students who choose higher education are more likely to be successful in their career paths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
In the contemporary era, there is an on-going debate about whether graduating at univ...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...rofessionally. Employers tend to choose people with academic qualifications for import...
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Line 2, column 575, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: rising
... qualifications may find it challenging to rise the ranks. On the other hand, it is m...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lves with the real working environment. As outlined above, after analyzing both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04363636364 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99935860912 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1019004959 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210191702666 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657181024798 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678069310576 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133787500104 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089999757748 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.