Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays there are various options for students after finishing high school. While there are benefits to students who get a job immediately after school, I would argue that pursuing higher education would be the best choice for students to have successful life.
On the one hand, students who get a job straight after school can have numerous realistic knowledge. They can gain their skills during their working progress. For instance, if they work immediately, they can have chances to consider their mistakes clearly so that they can come up with solutions to work better down the road. Besides, they can get benefits from their vocational experience during working duration. One obvious example is that if there are problems which happen without expectation, then tend to resolve them better than other people based on their practical knowledge.
On the other hand, studying at university or college brings the students various advantages when they seek for a job. First, university or college provides the students analytical and critical skills that are neccesary for people who want to work for leading companies. Moreover, these educational institutions offer students enough knowledge so that they can take part in the examinations to get bachelor or doctorate degrees and other qualifications. In this way, students tend to have more advantages in the recruitments when they compete with other candidates. For example, people who have the Ielts degree can get the priority for their qualification of using English compared with other opponents . Both two ways bring different benefits to the students, but I think that pursuing higher education at university or college provides them better opportunities to succeed in their careers.
Today students can have various choice for their life after school. While it is widely argued that landing a job immediately after school can lead students to successful career easily, I am in the opinion that pursuing higher education at educational institutions is the best way to succeed in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WORKING_PROGRESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work in progress'?
Suggestion: work in progress
...They can gain their skills during their working progress. For instance, if they work immediately...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng English compared with other opponents . Both two ways bring different benefits ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33230769231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74342390498 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7909003224 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.533333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199769561633 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838399971103 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522403939134 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141644185717 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379769385537 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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