Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, after graduating from school, students have several directions for their future. Some people believe that attending in higher education institutions is the best way to a successful occupation, while others argue that getting a job straight after school is better. I personally agree with the first viewpoint.
On the one hand, the option to start a job right after school is attractive for several reasons. To start with, many young people want to earn money as soon as possible. By this way, they can become independent as well as support their family in finance. Therefore, this path might be suitable for ones who hope to settle down early. Moreover, teenagers who decide to seek a job instead of continuing their studies might have chance to gain a lot of first-hand experiences and learn practical skills, which could help them to climb quickly their career ladder.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies in university or college. Firstly, there are certain jobs requiring academic qualification in many profession. For example, it is impossible to be a doctor, a lawyer or a teacher without having a relevant degree. Therefore, university graduates might have access to better job opportunities with a higher salaries. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, sometimes there are hundred of applicants for one position. Therefore, young people having a qualifications could prevail in competition for a job.
In conclusion, for all the reasons I mentioned above, I believe pursuing a higher educational degree is the best way to a successful career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun profession seems to be countable; consider using: 'many professions'.
Suggestion: many professions
...obs requiring academic qualification in many profession. For example, it is impossible to be a ...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...singly competitive, sometimes there are hundred of applicants for one position. Therefo...
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Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a qualification' or simply 'qualifications'?
Suggestion: a qualification; qualifications
...osition. Therefore, young people having a qualifications could prevail in competition for a job....
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he best way to a successful career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24150943396 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95870715418 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1299092327 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2397264049 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079049674234 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10533635188 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167609704952 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926211395605 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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