Some people believe that teaching at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
These days people are worried about the education of their children. While some believe that getting their children into a school will help them in their growth, others, however, oppose this view and instead focus on their learning at home. Both of the attitudes have benefits, but some striking detrimental effects on the mental health of these youngsters as well. But this particular attribute is absent in the school going, pupils.
Schooling of a child is a difficult job. These youngsters need trained people, in the form of teachers, to help them grow as per their potential. School for a child provides professionals, who know their job very well. For example, if a child is having difficulty in mathematics, a qualified person is usually available to troubleshoot his/her problem. However, if this particular scenario arises for a home-schooled child, he will most likely suffer, and will never be able to get guidance in time.
Home-schooled students have different challenges. Although they are academically successful, they lack the ability to interact with their age mates normally. According to a recent study published in Human Psychology Magazine which elaborated on the problem: they lack a social environment, which is required in the form of a classroom. Henceforth leading to some detrimental effects on their health.
To sum up, in my opinion, homeschooled children are prone to develop psychiatric illnesses and don’t get help in time. While school going children have the advantage of getting help from qualified teachers when they need it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Henceforth,
...is required in the form of a classroom. Henceforth leading to some detrimental effects on ...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nesses and don't get help in time. While school going children have the advantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.324 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91485848713 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3161254503 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200060808776 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661913897617 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445263013766 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114904666668 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499496578531 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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