Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others claim that students should focus on the subject that they are best or that they find interesting. Discuss both of view ad give your opinion.
Over the pass decades, education has been developing that it is compulsory in school for students to concentrate and learn all subjects to become a global citizen. Although, some people are option tat teenagers should focus on studying the subject which they like, I personally the students should learn all subjects up to their high school education and ten concentrating on the subject they are interested in.
On the one hand, there are several benefits that every student has different kind of interest and possesses special talent in specific domains. Following on from this, teenagers need to have separate environments to groom according to their likes and dislike right from the school level. Therefore, their talent and favor subject can achieve easily and efficiently.
On the other hand, students are very raw and immature and they always keep on changing their mind about their field interest with passage of time. This meas, it can result some disadvantages in the future, while studying all subjects will help them develop of various personality aspects. Furthermore, students need to be trained and educated in such a manner which could make them capable of tackling all kind of problems in life such as emotional, physical and professional. Especially, parents and teachers should have proper monitoring and guidance for teenagers to decide their future course of studies.
In conclusion, student need trying to learn all subjects up to a certain period of their life to avoid lacking knowledge and experience. In the later, the higher education students should be allowed to concentrate in the area o their interest only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the subject they are interested in. On the one hand, there are several benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343289764 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0013101988 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266112400588 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977174985088 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936143432502 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168115821096 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106352126983 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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