Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that there should be immutable punishments for certain crimes, while others have an opposite view. Although some significant benefits that fixed punishments bring, I believe that it is better to judge criminals base on their circumstances and the incentive for acting against the law.
There are two main reasons why it is said that each type of crime should be punished with fixed punishments. First of all, everyone is aware of punishing on each crime, so they know exactly and precisely punishment for certain crimes. Therefore, fixed punishment will show the fairly as well as transparency of the law system. Moreover, immutable punishment also an effective way to lighten the workload of ministry of justice to lessen to pressure of criminal cases while ensuring to security and fairly to the society. As a result, the rate of criminals will be reduced apparently.
On the other hand, I believe that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for getting involved in illegal activities should be taken into consideration. Some criminals break the law by mistake while others may do it on purpose; therefore, criminals should be punished relying on their motive. For example, murdering on purpose, compared to murdering by mistake to protect themselves, are obviously different. According to the rule, depending on how gravity the situation is, the magistrate will judge the level of punishment, but when they take the motivation onto an account, the level of punishment will be reduced. This way of judgment will show the humanity of the law system as well as the government.
In conclusion, besides the benefits fixed punishment brings, I believe that judging criminals depending on their circumstances and the motivation for breaking the law are obviously outweighed and more ethical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27645051195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93586387151 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518771331058 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1318181701 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461968528107 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166441507495 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120772866062 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287385888849 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712928834903 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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