Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
In recent times, every country has had its own set of laws that incur a punishment suitable to the offense. However, this has caused a lot of controversies. Some people argued that criminals should always be subject to fixed punishment for certain crimes Others argue that situations for committing the crime should be taken into account before inflicting punishment. From my point of view, I am personally inclined to the latter view that suggests considering the circumstances of a crime while sentencing someone.
On the one hand, I believe that severe punishment makes criminal activities reduced. The death penalty, life imprisonment is both restrictive rulings and warnings for criminals. It makes them understand that there are moral boundaries that cannot be reached. For instance, some countries often have low-crime rates due to aggressive measures for enforcing fixed punishments for designated crimes. Nevertheless, the main objective of the law and order is to protect the citizen và punish the wrongdoers. Consequently, we need to depend on the circumstances and the factors that cause those consequences, in order to make objective assessments.
On the other hand, persecuting a convict violate human rights; often without considering the aspects leading to such crime. For example, Yemen has always been harshly condemned by the international community because of its strict law. In Yemen, women do not have the right to sue, and when they have to go to court, it is almost impossible for them to sue. In addition, in any case, indirect murder is punishable by life in prison. It means that if a criminal holds a gun and points it at you, killing that person will put you in prison forever. Finally, in my opinion, a convicted person should be given punishment only based on the circumstances and severity of the crime.
In conclusion, I believe that both groups of the argument, for and against the fixed punishments, have their reasons. However, I think that penalties should be decided according to variant circumstances of criminals and keeping in mind that the aim of punishment is to prevent further crimes to happen.
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- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 87
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 84
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 84
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... sentencing someone. On the one hand, I believe that severe punishment makes cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in any case, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96668091755 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4030433831 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466870891651 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115818933694 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142738197591 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28482262364 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969357694751 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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