Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there is belief that the penalization for each type of crime should be unchangeable while some people think that punishments should be taken into consideration based on criminal's circumstances and the reason for their illegal activities. Personally, I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, there should be fixed punishments for benefits of society. Because this will help guarantee the stability and security through the minimum of crime. Clearly, if there is a certain punishment for each type of crime, people will more likely avoid committing crimes. As a result, living environment will be safer. Moreover, this practice is a greatly consolation to the victims, that their loss of property and beloved will be compensated based on fixed laws.
On the other hand, I believe that circumstance of a crime and the intention of committing should be given considerations when deciding the punishments. This may help establish and ensure justice and humanitarian of law. A person killing other because of self-defense can not be compared with a serial killer. A person burgling due to his family's financial difficulty is not similar with a robbery who steal money for his illegal activities. Thus, punishments should be flexible and taken into account in each situation. There have to fixed punishment for all crimes, but judges also should consider each case to give final decision.
In conclusion, despite necessity of fixed punishment, it seems to me that some cases should be decided by flexible laws to ensure equity and justice in society.
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- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make Has this become a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opimion 78
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this is a bad example to adolescents To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this is a bad example to adolescents To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('greatly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('consolation') instead of another adjective.
...ll be safer. Moreover, this practice is a greatly consolation to the victims, that their loss of prop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21115537849 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92686362682 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.935896929 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.534744795194 0.244688304435 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172116720623 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147507699121 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320733986277 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107399172325 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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