Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that the individuals should be able to keep all the revenue streams they earn and should not have to pay tax to the government. From my point of view, i mostly diagree with this notion because of tax's advantage. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, the administration of the government apparatus is hugely significant for the development of individuals life, so people must to obey the rules. Not only do tax will balance the individuals life and the nation, but also socioeconomic differences can be narrowed, being international country. Furthermore, though the helpful tax goverment can advance the facilities or equipment in some occupation and fields in the social such as academic education, mecial and entertainment. To illustrate, there was a statistic by David, the famous scientist professional which was about the economic systerm of london by tax' investment, though the servey the financy had increased graduately during 2000 to 2020.
However, this tax is still have numerous nagative aspect for the citizens life. The profit will be took advantage by various government for their own revenue, and also taking a plenty of dicorage from the individuals. Moreover some citizens will find any way to avoid the tax, this action will lead harmful influence for the individuals life, human patiently and development of their nation.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay that i totaly disagree with this statement, each ciziens need to have their own conscientious to obey their coutry's rules and countribute their abilities for the develoment of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, the administration of the ...
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...elopment of individuals life, so people must to obey the rules. Not only do tax will ba...
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...rules. Not only do tax will balance the individuals life and the nation, but also socioecon...
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...eased graduately during 2000 to 2020. However, this tax is still have numerous...
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...to 2020. However, this tax is still have numerous nagative aspect for the citize...
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...l have numerous nagative aspect for the citizens life. The profit will be took advantage...
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...lenty of dicorage from the individuals. Moreover some citizens will find any way to avoi...
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...ion will lead harmful influence for the individuals life, human patiently and development ...
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...he individuals life, human patiently and development of their nation. To conc...
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...tly and development of their nation. To conclude, by my agrument from these e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20992366412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93948889327 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.735655399 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202539593311 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805872721788 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127631111134 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124567173882 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10514887877 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.