Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some residents that they should be officially permitted to retain their earnings without paying any tax to the state where they live. In my opinion, I do not agree with this viewpoint.
That civilians should have a right to keep their own finance might be reasonable. The primary reason is that the money could be allocated for any purposes at their discretion. For example, the monthly income could be used to afford necessities or luxuries. Also, it could be accumulated in order to purchase high valued property, such as a house or land. Another instance is that the personal budget could be used to invest in individual development. A normal office worker can devote half of his earnings per month to health supplements and sports courses. Besides, the money could be utilized for camping trips to widen his horizons.
However, I totally disagree with this standpoint. State taxes are one of the indispensable parts for the provision of society’s services and infrastructure, which is the most important reason. To be more specific, when a system of healthcare in a remote region has become dilapidated, the taxes should be spent to ameliorate it in order to supply patients with more modern facilities. When a road in an urban area is damaged, the taxes should be used to reinstate it for smooth traffic flows. The second reason is that charity activities could be done with the government’s revenue. For example, ethnic minority groups could receive aids (food and clothing) from the nation’s organizations every month. This could enhance their standard of living to a higher extent as well as bring them joy and a secure feeling.
In summary, I firmly believe that all residents should pay tax as their regulatory compliance because of the above analysis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e state where they live. In my opinion, I do not agree with this viewpoint. That...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...trips to widen his horizons. However, I totally disagree with this standpoint. ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... joy and a secure feeling. In summary, I firmly believe that all residents shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0067114094 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79973584242 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5104166612 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294310096373 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084789194592 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089983330944 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206704028654 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10472665151 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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