Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
It is well said that "When government accepts responsibility for people, then people no longer take responsiblitiy for themselves". With the rise in modernization, a man has tranformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take the first step on the moon. For instance, the given topic asserts that should residents keep all their wages or have to pay some part to government as tax? Through this essay I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through observations and examples.
On one side, there are some people who believes that we do not have to pay tax to the government because as we can see that in our country, total 70% of the people are below to the poverty line. They do not have house to live. They do not have clothes to wear and also they do not have food to eat. It is fact that, in our country, a poor becomes more poor and a rich becomes more rich. This is just because of the government. Infact government make a law in our country that a govenment employee must have to pay tax and they follow that law and pay tax to the government, then why in our country people below poverty line are more than 70%?
In the second place, when we pay tax to the government, then is it the responsibility of the government to provide proper facilities to the people like hospital faclities, school facilities, roads facilities etc but we do not have any facility. For example: when we go to hospital, there is no doctors in the hospital, there is no test machines in the hospitals. Whether, we talk about schools, there is no proper facilities of pure water. Childrens drink contaminated water which causes illness. There is no proper benches in the schools. There is no teacher in the class. Thirdly, in our country road are not well maintaned. When we go anywhere, we see that there are so many pits in the road which cause many dangerous accidents to the public. Especially, in rainy seasons that pits filled with water which cause injury to the public. There is no lightening facilities in the streets.
Thus, it can be asserted that it is a debatable issue. Although, I believe that people who earn more than the predefined amount have to pay tax and not for those who earn less than that amount so govenmemt should not force any poor people to pay tax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'housed'.
Suggestion: housed
...w to the poverty line. They do not have house to live. They do not have clothes to we...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...o eat. It is fact that, in our country, a poor becomes more poor and a rich becomes mo...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no doctors'?
Suggestion: there are no doctors
...y. For example: when we go to hospital, there is no doctors in the hospital, there is no test machi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59472422062 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68061540003 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462829736211 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9049341391 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3043478261 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275896838473 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652500264306 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101582972 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166423140033 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928266559399 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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