Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning a country's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
The vast technology of the present era has made it possible for the individual to commute to various places. To which, it is opined by some people that tourist should be lone-wolfs to enjoy and inherit the county's culture while other opposes this. In my perspective it is much more dependent upon the persons preference rather than being a public opinion.
The opiners of the first view have different reasons behind supporting the though of travelling alone. The prepondrant one is that it gives a person the feeling of joy and helps into the richness and variety of the culture during his experience. To instantiate, a person who travels alone often have much more time to stand around and look at the things which is not possible in a group as all members have different likes ans dislikes. Another obvious reason is that a person can decide whether to go to a place or not as the whole travelling plan depends upon him or her and no other person can meddle in his decisions. Fine example of it can be seen in the life of many tourists who are travelling in a group and often have disputes about their destinations.
Changing the perspective to the supporters of second view who believe that people should travel in group. The predominant cause behind this opinion is the security and large group bring to the individual or the whole members. To exemplify, while travelling to new places there is often chance of being attacked by robbers, hugs and local goons and in these cases a group act as like a z security for the person. Looking at other causes which are minor but also contains a huge part of this opinion is that commuting in a group allows the person to share his or her feelings, views of culture with the other members and gain knowledge from them. The good example of this can be cited in a US households where people usually travel with their family to different places and openly give their opinions regarding each a every thing they can in every country and culture.
To recapitulate with my view, people are free to decide whether they want to be lone wolf or pack of herds while travelling. As some people like to be alone while others do not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60567010309 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46461163281 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0592227246 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.133333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226616011157 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816355398263 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05658635277 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142954892743 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491107379145 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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