What should a country do to become successful?
Primary motive of every regime around the world is enhancement of their respective regions. For such a improvement, authorities have to consider various sectors of society like transport, education, finance, marketing, accounts and many other so that the country can be improved in a whole rather than just a development of single entity.
The path of success begins from the development of education department of the nation which holds the key to future generation’s growth and how much they can contribute to leveling up the economy. One fine example of this is Japan, where students do not have to take any exams until they reach 4th grade as the starting three years are contributed to establishing good manners rather than judging their knowledge which later on help them to become good citizens of country. Along with this, education also imparts the necessary skills to survive and develop the community.
Just like education, another important sector that government needs to efficiently manage is health and lifestyle. As without good health, no one can work and similarly, if someone is living below poverty line, then the first goal in his mind will be to uplift his own self rather the country and a person can even do crooked things for it. Some common examples of this are the countries which are considered poor and underdeveloped like Pakistan and if these nations want to be successful, they have to upgrade health and living standard of inhabitants.
Before hammering down the pin, above mentioned are few things government needs to do for prosperous country and for this to happen, developments in other fields such as infrastructure are necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t of their respective regions. For such a improvement, authorities have to consid...
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Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...g down the pin, above mentioned are few things government needs to do for prosperous c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16788321168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84793395215 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4700279222 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123405146986 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412590324175 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331175572972 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697533453649 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213251039073 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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