Some people believe that unpaid community service should be complusery in high school. To which extend do you agree or disgree?
No one can cast a shadow of doubt the fact that education plays a very important role in the live of people. some people have voiced that highschools have to enforce their students to doing social services without receiving any payment as an extra-curriculum activities. I do believe this decision will be beneficial and have a lot of advantages that could outweigh the backdraws, if any.
children have appreciably impressionable minds and school programs should be redesigned in such way that they will ensure the overall development of students for their future life. Working for community services can offer children invalubale experiences which traditional education system is not able to do so. To illustrate that in japanese schools, students have to teach some courses to their peers who show poor performances in them. it is no surprise then the best instructors and teachers belong to Japan's schools where they have practised teaching skills from the earlier ages.
Moreover, these kind of programs could provide the opportunities that make children become a much more socially aware and responsible preson. To reach this aim, schools should instill the necessity of serving the society from a very younger ages. For example, japanese students have been made to clean up a park every friday in order to inculcate in them respect for person that doing job. that also has a greater purpose that littering is an unpalatable habit.
In conclusion, mandatory community services in schools have a lot of advantages not only for society but for the future life of children. In the future, governments should condiser it in their education curriculum. In addition, japanese education system can be defined as a successful role model for applying this policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25263157895 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85430778745 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.199262641 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169404931179 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566642055211 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045019444418 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105597382137 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338562932769 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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