In recent years, there has been a growing concern about whether students should do some volunteer works as part of high school life. This has led to a suggestion that volunteer service should be a mandatory course of the high school programs. In my opinion, I strongly agree with that advice to a large extent for two reasons.
To begin with, there is a disadvantage of treating unpaid community service as a very important thing in high school programs which is wasting time. For instance, if at end of the semester, there are lots of review stuff that students have to do for preparing their final exams with lots of volunteer works that need to be done, it will make students be pressured. As a result, they may not receive a good result in their exam and behave negatively during their volunteer.
In fact, community volunteer is necessary to be in high school programs as a benefit of learning more about society. For example, if students help the community a lot when they are not an adult yet, they will learn a lot from their volunteer before they work in the real society. In other words, students can understand more about how to treat people in the society, which will help them do better in their future work.
In addition, volunteer works in high school courses can help students to deal with the stress in their studies. It is obvious that doing some interesting and meaningful volunteer works can help students under stress be relaxed and “escape from their school”. At the same time, they can get a feeling of satisfaction after they help others, which can encourage them to continue doing it and also makes more people be positive because of students’ help.
To recapitulate, the idea of making community volunteer be a mandatory part of high school programs. Although doing that will waste some students’ study time, it still can help students to understand society early and relief their pressure in their studies. Therefore, I will assert that it is totally acceptable to that.
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
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- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun volunteer seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of volunteers'.
Suggestion: lots of volunteers
...do for preparing their final exams with lots of volunteer works that need to be done, it will mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80924855491 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55809573458 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482658959538 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1337308327 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232024218584 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975896401568 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570584263881 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155560467468 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598935132131 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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