Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
High schools should not just focus on the schools subjects; they should also prioritize voluntary works that serves a community. I completely agree with the given statement as it increases social responsibilities and also boost their academic performance. The viewpoints and the reasoning for supporting the view is fully explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, when students are engaged in such community work they will build the social responsibilities, which is a positive factor since it can make them socially aware. They will also be more connected towards outdoor social activities making them to uproot the introvert nature and assist them to be exposing to the service sector. This activity will also make them mentally as well as physically fit for the reason that they get the proper exposure with different people enabling them to learn from the others experience, and also make them physically fit by getting proper involvement in physical works around the community. For example; it is found that student engaged in social service will focus their life towards serving others than focusing only on their career which will build a better community.
Second of all, scholars will also achieve higher academic success. This might be surprising but it is mostly found that students who are exposed to community service will have motive to make influence to the society, thus they have goal and are far more willing to achieve those goals than those who are just studying indoor with no activities involved. Moreover, they can learn beyond the curriculum which the others’ (curriculum focused students) lack. Therefore, to boost the academic performance and remain motivated these activities are mostly essential.
In conclusion, I believe if children are equipped with the opportunity to be engaged in unpaid community service they can learn about their social responsibilities and at the same time help to focus and be motivated to set goal and study harder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30379746835 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76661924054 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8920873408 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127311379782 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502234542163 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448537187049 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940359729526 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450018269048 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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