Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Numerous civilizations think that school should obligate the unpaid serving community in the high school schedule. This essay agrees about community service necessary for its benefits. it not only ameliorates the society but also helps build the students' character.
Due to the increasing voluntary young force by the action, the community will be in better-shaped. The original core of the activities is already helpful, but when they've been operated by the high schoolers, they will powerfully encourage the adult to replica them. For instance, there are a number of students take part in the Blue Summer, a national voluntary activity in Vietnam, and they fuel the grownup to make the impact of their lives by spread the information of the green environment or to let the kids go to school in the uneducated areas.
Obligating the younger to engage with the society will aid in shaping their future-selves. The kindly action will help their moral sense as well as their kindness toward people, environment, etc. Executing them, the students likewise practice their lesson and have a safe outdoor-activities bettering their health since it withdraws them from mobile phone and television. The rate of crime in the age from 25 to 30 admit that they never join the social activities for thinking they were useless and meaningless.
In conclusion, the unpaid community service should be obligatory for its assistant in improving the society's conscience along with help the high schoolers with their righteousness and their well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92198719416 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1998487547 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169760256893 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676467819907 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691709490847 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125379960743 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720204181489 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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