Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both side and give your opinion.
The debate over whether to develop the economy for its benefits of dropping the poverty or to immediately stop for the environment is the recent hot topic. This essay will debate both views and give away the idea of myself.
The ongoing growth of the economy is obviously helping poor people. The increase of factories, farms, etc helps lower classes with employment, educational establishment, medical centers, better material facilities. The strong growth in economy and employment opportunities incent parents in invest in their children's education, health as well as their own which contribute to crafting a healthy society. Those lead to indigence reduction follow with shortening the inequality.
On the other hand, industrial site expansion has a serious effect on nature. Enormous factories bump out chemicals fluid to the river, eventually end up in the ocean killing the aquatic animal, destroy the coral reef. On the land, burning fossil fuel to create energy which is the important element for growing economy add in the air pollution, therefore, amplify the greenhouse effect. Something as little as the nylon that industry use for various reasons contaminates the environment with their presence.
In my opinion, economic development will definitely help to improve the population's quality of life. And we can easily pick out the drawback of that. The challenge is growing economic without damage the ecosystem and that is what scientists and countries all over the world are putting the effort in. investing in the green energy like sun, tidal or wind; governments conduct the environmental law and help to raise environmental awareness are gestures to develop the world day-by-day both economy and environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al centers, better material facilities. The strong growth in economy and employment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49446494465 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84958784202 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3932574098 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1552561662 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042701315371 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474888881384 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845107519835 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693279997274 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.